Review Detail of Captain_Apocalypse in When a Monster Becomes a Demon

Beautiful story. Well written, excellent character development, grammar was superb. The jokes were very funny, had me giggling like a school girl talking about her crush. The chapters were very long, which I loved. Overall, everything was 5/5. I would like to see this continued with Sao 2, elveheim, and Gun Gale online. GGO is where I think Tyler would shine. Beautifully written!