Review Detail of 0zymandias in FGO: Parallel chaos

So i will make it short Good idea Great Mechanics However I hope you take it more slow and make the singularities longer for character’s development and stuff I like the Mc but he feels off. Also author you don’t need to update fast take it slow,i feel like the only flaw is writing quality.there is not that much grammar mistakes but the way sentences are formed feels weird