Review Detail of SevenZeros in Infinite Silver Eyes: The Infinite God

The characters and the places don't show much description, there is nothing wrong with grammar but, some paragraphs are too long and some are too short but the story is kinda good, I only have read up to chapter 5 by the way, and 5 stars even thou I will put 4 stars because this is your first review and I don't want to disrespect you.