Review Detail of mujaki2 in SSS SKILL: DUPLICATE

Item: SSS SKILL: DUPLICATE
Rating: 4.6

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mujaki2Lv1511mthmujaki2

This story is an unpolished GEM!!!The grammar at first is terrible, but it gets better. The story is genius and the action nonstop- very descriptive battles. sometimes even too much (3chpt battles.)but yet very satisfying. This Brilliant concept and story are worth the time. I can keep this in my libraries.

SSS SKILL: DUPLICATE

imWold

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imWoldAutorimWold

I have already edited the grammar. I haven't completely edited all the chapters, but I think the story is much more readable now. You can try reading the fighting scenes again. I added new scenes because I had to delete many words for a better reading experience.

5mth

Dream_Lord14Lv11Dream_Lord14

Try out this new novel.Survival Oddysey

8mth