Review Detail of Xenal in Life Exchange Game

The Novel has been completed, I have been working on version 2.0 quality! It saves every: Place, Name and Object. It will make everything stay consistent and allow me to modify names even after translating. This will allow higher quality translations. Oh, I know the writing style (Paragraphs) of this book was all over the place. It, will be fixed, in the, next, book. Does anyone have any recommendations to translate next?