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I haven't read yet but you deserve a 5* review cause you wrote one of the best MC's I ever read in your other novel. sad that u dropped that. but here's hoping I'll read that again someday even better in a rewrite. keep up the good work kyle
Accursed Dices: Horizon of Ages
Kyle_Kingsmaker
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Thanks for the review, it really motivates me to do even better! Also, sorry about the other novel, but if it does something, I plan to rewrite that one in the future. And I also recommend reading my review to get a better grasp of what to expect from this novel. The MC here though is a bit different from Hai, but does resemble him in some ways. Once again, thanks for the review! 🍷😎
ohh I read that. I gotta say your synopsis is cooooooool. I can already see it turning out good in your hands. and as for our best mc Hai - he's tooooo smart to be stopped by a book drop. he might've already expected it & planned for it lol. don't stress over anything & focus on this one. all the best on wsa participation btw. and r u planning to mass release beginning chapters together , or will u post one by one
Kyle_Kingsmaker:Thanks for the review, it really motivates me to do even better! Also, sorry about the other novel, but if it does something, I plan to rewrite that one in the future. And I also recommend reading my review to get a better grasp of what to expect from this novel. The MC here though is a bit different from Hai, but does resemble him in some ways. Once again, thanks for the review! 🍷😎
One by one. If I'm honest, it's harder than expected to write from a blind MC's POV, I have to take care to not stretch things too much and cause the chapter to be a slow one, but I also can't rush and let things became more vague than they already are. Life is hard... And about Hai... You might like the beginning of the rewrite, when it comes.
DevilDarkness:ohh I read that. I gotta say your synopsis is cooooooool. I can already see it turning out good in your hands. and as for our best mc Hai - he's tooooo smart to be stopped by a book drop. he might've already expected it & planned for it lol. don't stress over anything & focus on this one. all the best on wsa participation btw. and r u planning to mass release beginning chapters together , or will u post one by one
ok. I'll wait for the release then. it's in the library now. ☺😌 . tho on a side note - aren't you starting late for WSA, it started 2 months ago right. or were u busy with some exams or stuff
Kyle_Kingsmaker:One by one. If I'm honest, it's harder than expected to write from a blind MC's POV, I have to take care to not stretch things too much and cause the chapter to be a slow one, but I also can't rush and let things became more vague than they already are. Life is hard... And about Hai... You might like the beginning of the rewrite, when it comes.
To be honest, the WSA is just because. I'm not doing it with the intention to win, but more to see if I can get some "unexpected gains", so I don't mind starting late. And no, I'm not busy with exams but some things do keep me from time to time, though I'm going to make sure that I can get my schedule right this time. 🍷😎
DevilDarkness:ok. I'll wait for the release then. it's in the library now. ☺😌 . tho on a side note - aren't you starting late for WSA, it started 2 months ago right. or were u busy with some exams or stuff
Kyle_Kingsmaker:To be honest, the WSA is just because. I'm not doing it with the intention to win, but more to see if I can get some "unexpected gains", so I don't mind starting late. And no, I'm not busy with exams but some things do keep me from time to time, though I'm going to make sure that I can get my schedule right this time. 🍷😎
DevilDarkness:just an extra question--why do u always use these same 2 emojis 🍷😎
Kyle_Kingsmaker:Thanks for the review, it really motivates me to do even better! Also, sorry about the other novel, but if it does something, I plan to rewrite that one in the future. And I also recommend reading my review to get a better grasp of what to expect from this novel. The MC here though is a bit different from Hai, but does resemble him in some ways. Once again, thanks for the review! 🍷😎
Perhaps... But, this might have a more serious tune overall, focused in survival, so the culture part might not be that highlighted most of time. Btw, thanks for reading and for the feedback! 🍷😎
Vince_Gregorie:Author is this book for cultured men?image
I don't mind a Harem subplot or Romance subplot, btw the start was great it felt like I was reading a horror novel and the way you described the scene was fantastic.
Kyle_Kingsmaker:Perhaps... But, this might have a more serious tune overall, focused in survival, so the culture part might not be that highlighted most of time. Btw, thanks for reading and for the feedback! 🍷😎image
Thanks, man. And I would like for you and the other readers to keep giving me feedback about the POV, because as I said, this is the first time I write a blind character and write from his POV, so I don't know if I'm dragging too much with details etc. And I don't know if the harem and romance will be subplot, since there will be a focus on them, but that's that.
Vince_Gregorie:I don't mind a Harem subplot or Romance subplot, btw the start was great it felt like I was reading a horror novel and the way you described the scene was fantastic.
The details were perfect for the dark theme of the novel and it is pretty immersive so it's good, but still that's just my opinion I don't know about the others.
Kyle_Kingsmaker:Thanks, man. And I would like for you and the other readers to keep giving me feedback about the POV, because as I said, this is the first time I write a blind character and write from his POV, so I don't know if I'm dragging too much with details etc. And I don't know if the harem and romance will be subplot, since there will be a focus on them, but that's that.