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The writing style is hard to read. It's emotionless and the words used make it seem like the author was beaten with a dictionary until they could only write in a ridiculously formal/robotic way. POV changes do nothing for the sense of the person we are reading from and don't match their character at all. If I wasn't directly shown the POV change I wouldn't know that it had changed. I ended up skimming most of the story b/c it was so boring and repetitive. I won't be continuing this.

The Ultron

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Beliebt bei 4 Personen

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