I like the story's concept and world building. So far, the characters introduced appear to have very different motivations and thoughts regarding the conflict of Magic vs Tech and the appearance of the new mysterious school. Vocabulary-wise, the story may require some improvement. Aside from that I do think that there's potential in this story so do give it a try :)
hypoxis
Beliebt bei 1 Personen
MÖGENKeine Antworten. Seien Sie der Erste!