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Item: Immortal Dream Cult
Rating: 3.4

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jon_wanLv41yrjon_wan

I advise on starting at chapter 31. The first chapters didn't give enough traction and build up to the book title they sound wasted.And the protagonist age and his character maybe it's meant to be a slow burn Will keep updating for it has a good premise

Immortal Dream Cult

EmpyreanLord

Liked it!

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jon_wanLv4jon_wan

Since there is gonna be a rewrite I advocate the story will be 5 starAnd Stella needs to be changed role wiseA cult leader is something we respect and relation with cultists needs to be Jesus to Christians or Gandhi to Hindus

1yr