Review Detail of Crying_crying123 in Moonlit Identity [BL]

Liked the story and plot. Writing Quality Not bad might need some editing) "It said your first book is the worst when it comes to writing. So I mean it's a really great first effort. The mystery is written well. No infor dumping happening But sometimes there's too much lack of information. I want to know when Mc transmigrated? not for it to be finished in or two lines and then brushed under rug in name of change in personality after awakening. Story Development - It's nice but I kinda like the fast pace. Character Design-I like Mc how he actually thinks when put in nearly death situation doesn't give a damn about destiny. Thinks about taking advantage of the situation knows when he is being insulted but sucks it up until the cards turn. But I mean I thought he was young not 27 but like 21ish. Updating Stability -Every single second you don't spend on writing is a second wasted. There's no bigger lie than this. Cause you got a life. Always Quality over Quantity so do it with your pace. World Background It's a mystery to me still but a good mystery I wanna know how these vampires got cursed? how mc transmigrated? what's is his past? So many questions. And if you want the answer to it read the damn book lazy people. Like right now read it.