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I really liked the idea of a fanfic, but its execution....disgusting. First: a person who knows that either the whole world will be destroyed or he will die - is attached to people as if it were necessary. And his sociopathism is no excuse. He had a wife, he had a lot of acquaintances in the games. But no, the main character is shown as if he never even had anyone to talk to. Second: for some reason, mc thinks that legilimency is a great ability and starts to develop it before oclumency. Idiot. Occlumency is a way to protect the mind and also a way to empower the brain. He should have asked his mother to teach it. And in general, before sending, ask Adam a question, will his knowledge of past lives be protected? He read and looked through ALL the information, where mind reading was mentioned more than once. He even watched Fantastic Beasts, so he must know for sure. Only because of this mind mc can put zero points. Thirdly, he sees what causes changes in the canon simply by his existence (by the way, where is the #AU tenant??? would see him - he would not even start reading.), but at the same time he does not try to analyze the actions of other people. Fourth: Ron snores. I am absolutely sure that a person who has studied potions for five years (±) knows if there is a potion that will help you stop snoring. Or a spell. In extreme cases - Silencio. Bottom line - Great idea, but I hate reading about stupid characters. Google translated.
Heroes: The Cancer of the Multiverse
Sergeantgreen
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Hello, if you're reading this, be aware that there might be a few minor spoilers in this comment. Thank you for giving this story a chance and even leaving a review. I want to address some of the points you raised, which might become clearer in later chapters beyond Chapter 8 or 9. Firstly, about the main character getting attached to others despite knowing the risks. It's quite natural for someone to develop feelings for those who show kindness and spend time together. So, even if he knows they might die, he can't simply turn off his emotions. Regarding him being shown as if he never had anyone to talk to, that's not entirely accurate. In his first life, he never had someone his age to interact with, which is his main problem. He struggles with socializing with people his age and would fit better with an older group. This will gradually change as the story progresses. You mentioned that it was silly for him to try to learn legilimency before oclumency. The reason he prioritized legilimency is because his main objective is to find and kill the hero, and mind-reading is an useful skill for that. However, I agree that his approach to learning it was flawed, but this issue will be addressed in later chapters when he gets better resources. Also, it's worth noting that oclumency is primarily a mental defense, not a way to empower the mind, as some fanfictions depict it. As for him not asking Adam more questions, it's something I thought about too. At the time I started the story, I wanted to delve into the plot quickly, so it might have felt rushed. But it's important to remember that Adam doesn't have all the answers, as he is not all-knowing. Still your argument is to a certain extend definitely valid. Regarding the point that the main character should analyze people's behavior and actions, he does that a lot, but not every chapter is filled with detailed internal monologues about it. Doing so would make the story repetitive and hard to read. Rest assured, he will analyze and unravel the mysteries surrounding the changes in the story but not everything he sees or hears will be analysed immedietly. Finally, you mentioned Ron snoring, and yes, the main character will eventually use the Silencio spell, but not in the first night. I hope this clarifies some aspects of the story. I appreciate your feedback, and I'll consider your points while polishing the story later on.
Occlumency is first and foremost a defense. But. structuring your mind to build mental protection - will in any case give Profit for the speed of processing and storing information. I'm not talking about the citadel of thought, the castle of the mind and other crazy fanfiction ideas. And again, I don’t take into account how Potter was taught, because I’m sure there are more adequate methods. in my understanding, mind protection is like an alarm - when it works, you can protect your mind by straining it, and constant practice will simply bring protection to automatism Google translate
Sergeantgreen:Hello, if you're reading this, be aware that there might be a few minor spoilers in this comment. Thank you for giving this story a chance and even leaving a review. I want to address some of the points you raised, which might become clearer in later chapters beyond Chapter 8 or 9. Firstly, about the main character getting attached to others despite knowing the risks. It's quite natural for someone to develop feelings for those who show kindness and spend time together. So, even if he knows they might die, he can't simply turn off his emotions. Regarding him being shown as if he never had anyone to talk to, that's not entirely accurate. In his first life, he never had someone his age to interact with, which is his main problem. He struggles with socializing with people his age and would fit better with an older group. This will gradually change as the story progresses. You mentioned that it was silly for him to try to learn legilimency before oclumency. The reason he prioritized legilimency is because his main objective is to find and kill the hero, and mind-reading is an useful skill for that. However, I agree that his approach to learning it was flawed, but this issue will be addressed in later chapters when he gets better resources. Also, it's worth noting that oclumency is primarily a mental defense, not a way to empower the mind, as some fanfictions depict it. As for him not asking Adam more questions, it's something I thought about too. At the time I started the story, I wanted to delve into the plot quickly, so it might have felt rushed. But it's important to remember that Adam doesn't have all the answers, as he is not all-knowing. Still your argument is to a certain extend definitely valid. Regarding the point that the main character should analyze people's behavior and actions, he does that a lot, but not every chapter is filled with detailed internal monologues about it. Doing so would make the story repetitive and hard to read. Rest assured, he will analyze and unravel the mysteries surrounding the changes in the story but not everything he sees or hears will be analysed immedietly. Finally, you mentioned Ron snoring, and yes, the main character will eventually use the Silencio spell, but not in the first night. I hope this clarifies some aspects of the story. I appreciate your feedback, and I'll consider your points while polishing the story later on.