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The novel has potential, especially with the combination of different mythical lands and the theme of seeking vengeance. The interactions between Mellisent and Aurelius are intriguing, and their relationship could provide a strong backbone for the story. However, the summary feels a bit cliche, and it would be helpful to have more unique elements to set it apart from other fantasy romance novels. Consider adding in more unique elements to make the story stand out, such as a unique magic system or a twist on typical fantasy tropes. Additionally, try to focus on developing the characters and their motivations, so readers can connect with them on a deeper level.

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Thanks for the review and the suggestions ☺️☺️ I will try to incorporate them to make the story more unique.