Review Detail of Puffi_Saver in The Avatar Princess

This is my first review, so I don't really know how to write one. So first I like the concept. The Grammer is good. What I would do to make the story better would be to make some type of separation when we change which characters we follow. It can be a little confusing sometimes. That's all I can write for now, because there are only 3 chapters out. Hope you'll continue writing.