Review Detail of NixOrtikal in Sweet Intention

Drama!!! The writer does a really good job of capturing the struggles and desires of a young woman. You can't help but turn those pages as we follow the FL's journey to find a suitable donor for her child. What happens when your desires overtake your common sense? I feel like the FL is in for a world of pain. There are a lot grammar mistakes that can easily be fixed with an editor but this story has a lot potential.