It's a great story with lots of potential. The interaction between the characters is pretty well done, together with their descriptions. I'll follow it and add to my collection. The only thing here that is holding the potential of the novel is the grammar. Nothing that a good rewriting couldn't do. All in all, keep the good work :)
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