Review Detail of FaeyVor5651 in Grave of infatuations: The odyssey of an autumn rose

The part where the baby boy was placed in the river reminded me of Moses and I loved it, especially when God Tan decided to raise him. However, there were a lot of descriptions and I got quite confused. It's a good book, but at some point I wanted people to interact with each other. Your world description is pretty good and I couldn't find any grammatical error. Well written.👍