Review Detail of MiaSilver in I WANT THE DEVIL NOT THE VAMPIRE

Alright here we go: 1) The author's storytelling reads quite smoothly, the scene transitioning is done well 2)Although the grammar might need a little work, it doesnt disrupt the narrative of the story so its readable with above average quality 3)Glimpses of each character's personality is shown quite prominently, so characters are not one dimensional 4)The conflicts and relationships between certain characters makes it thrilling,as well as the mysteries created subtly along the way are good enough to keep the reader engaged. this work definitely has a lot of potential, best of luck