I love the start to this. The detail almost flows around you as it drags you under and into this world the author has created, like the rapids of a river. One thing I would say however is that it is slightly hard t understand sometimes when it comes to the dialogue.
vorlefan
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MÖGENvorlefan:Thanks man! Do you speak about the dialogue with slangs and with dialect?