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Item: Is It Wrong To Find His Own Sun
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SilvurKlawLv141yrSilvurKlaw

Dude punctuation goes a long way to making people want to read your story. Get a proof reader or a grammar program of some kind cause my brain keeps stalling trying figure out what I’m reading.

Is It Wrong To Find His Own Sun

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Psy_duckAutorPsy_duck

thanks you for the advice, I already use grammarly I will try to take notice in my punctuation in the future.

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Azathoth2Lv4Azathoth2

is this a harem??

Psy_duck:thanks you for the advice, I already use grammarly I will try to take notice in my punctuation in the future.
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