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Not bad! Good start, however, I found the multiple changes in POV kind of confusing at first. It might be best for continuity purposes to stick to one POV for example, 3rd person in order to keep it flowing better, but other than that it was quite enjoyable to read, with strong world-building and character backgrounds.

7th Hero(DELETED)

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