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As I scanned, I saw that there were less periods per paragraph that it looks like it was a single sentence. It can be fixed. Also there are upper cased letter in the middle of a sentence. The grammar is not all over the place. No errors and was smooth to read. The story is about an overpowered God who choose to be incarnated in his juniors creation. So if you like overpowered mc with a drop of sexy stuff this is your cup of tea.

Beyond Almighty

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