Review Detail of Ah_ren in Black Swordsman in Konoha

Reason for so few berserk fanfics... Super tragic story with the demons being super op as compared to Guts... The things Guts went through... oh man... and poor Caska... *shudders*... You know the worst thing about it? Things like that have happened in real life... Instead of demons, it was humans.

I have read and enjoyed two of the books you have written. It really made me proud that an author like you actually read and commented on my book.

Thanks for reading my stories. I appreciate it. You need an editor, though. Many grammer mistakes... 😬

try using grammarly app. It's helpful.

Instead of writing by myself, I write flowing sentences with the help of translation. Sometimes very complicated things turn out. I think what makes it mix is the way I form the sentences. English Turkish and English have two very different structures from each other. I think this is spoiling it.

Ah. Yes, translation doesn't always work perfectly.

author, I would like to know if the fanfic will have a lot of tragedy for the mc, and betrayal of allies and others?, I didn't really like these tags

Any suggestions for tags? I just chose randomly. If you have any suggestions, I can adjust accordingly.

I was just in doubt because the tragedy and betrayal tag suggests that the mc will have a life full of tragedies and maybe betrayal, if that doesn't happen I suggest you remove it. just my opinion

Thanks you

Im interested i got two questions one will the mc have a harem im looking for harem fics and two just makeing sure the wifus wont get raped by the enemy ever right Cus i hate ntr XD

Author friend, I have a few questions. What part of the canon is this "Guts" from? before "Griffith" chooses to become a demon or after "Guts" has already lost his hand? What will Guts's power level be like, because the Chakra is such a big trap that it's not even funny and Guts can be stupidly strong, maybe even inhumanly strong but the chakra just breaks the ashjdg of how overpowered he is. Could it be that now the chakra improves it passively? obviously it will have an affinity towards the yang attribute so it will most likely heal very very quickly from any damage.