I mean I think it's pretty good. Yeah, pretty good 👍
The_Square_Squad
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hey, Author who is the love interest? Hermione or Luna? If you can make both the love interest of the mc then it will be great.
it's good. Just keep it going, the flow feels natural, without any additional rendition in the story line so far. it's going through its own pace.