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Review Detail of DaoistyQNGiX in One Piece: Explosion(Discontinued, will reboot)

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More OCs added to the crew besides the MC soooo that’a dumb since there are so many characters in One Piece and it ruins part of the MCs uniqueness. The MC somehow knows Rokushiki and Haki but gets hurt against pirates in the east blue. He is nerfed BIG TIME and still should stomp Luffy but is follwing him for some reason. The author should have gave him the knowledge of Haki and the skills but not being able to do any since you already ruined your own MC. Story is exactly like cannon but the MC fights with Zoro against buggy pirates and then fought with Luffy to beat Kuro… Zoro and Luffy didn’t need the MCs help at all but the author is forcing the MC to interfere just so it is a bit different from cannon lol should have just ended the MCs fight against one of the brothers in Black Cat pirates and have Luffy fight Kuro with us not needing to know what happens in that fight since we already know what happens. Have the MCs pov of his fight or the fight that he is watching… maybe have him leave to get the ship ready or do something instead of interfering with a fight that canon luffy wins lol could have been a good story

One Piece: Explosion(Discontinued, will reboot)

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I would like to see u do better. or even make a proper Oc to begin with and not every single person has watched One Piece