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R0manceLover
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So far this book has a really good story line. I do believe some editorial help with proofreading and formatting would be beneficial to the book as it can get confusing what is internal monologue and external dialogue. Overall the author is very creative and love where the story is headed.

A Monstrosity (BoyxBoy) (Mpreg)

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monmot
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The book is really great😍, but some corrections are necessary. It's hard to understand dialogues and thoughts. Apart from that, the book is worth recommending🤩🤩🤩🥰🥰