Review Detail of Gotha in HP: First Light

Item: HP: First Light
Rating: 1.8

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GothaLv141yrGotha

I'll overlook the grammar. But seriously? The thing you did with Dumbledore was way too much, all you did was create an unnecessary drama to early.

HP: First Light

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MCOverseAutorMCOverse

Thank you for your review. The main character had to wake up to reality, and I think it is an important point to convey to the reader that the story will not progress in powder pink. Maybe it could be better in terms of its setup, but I don’t think it’s bad.

1yr

Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

Mehhh I've seen worse fanfics and they have more and better reviews. For example, I've seen a fanfic where the MC becomes the owner of the fifth house at Hogwarts and Hermione is the owner of the MC.

1yr

Samot_SempaiLv11Samot_Sempai

I think the plot twist was good.And I agree with the...

MCOverse:Thank you for your review. The main character had to wake up to reality, and I think it is an important point to convey to the reader that the story will not progress in powder pink. Maybe it could be better in terms of its setup, but I don’t think it’s bad.

1yr