Review Detail of sleep1ngkn1ght in Thoughts of a Second Chance

Author here, I'm still trying to learn this platform and find my footing in the story. The first chapter is my first time writing a story so if there are any criticisms please let me know. I don't know how to display a chapter schedule, so for now expect 3 chapters a week-ish. I'll have a new one out tomorrow. Thanks for viewing my story!