Truly an exciting read! The premise is interesting and shows a lot of potential, I especially love how the author phrases each scene so beautifully that I could easily picture what's happening. It's like I'm watching a movie! The pace is fast but not confusing, overall a great read! A little bit of suggestion though, I think it'll be better if the author could spill a bit about what the story is about in the synopsis as it'll help in piquing a reader's interest. I'll be waiting for the next update so work hard, author!
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