Like other works of this author. It has great potential but it burns everything making days pass like months and never-ending loops of infodumps and worse repetition of plot to re-explain what happened 3 seconds ago(or 3 chapter ago by lenght of filler). Character don't get aby deep all of them are copies of the first one(old man1, old man2,old man3. chic1,chic2,chic3... genius1 etc etc)
ranmaro
Liked it!
MÖGENranmaro:I believe you don't like my writing style in general. Anyway, that's just normal. It's not like every reader will like what I write. Thanks for trying out my novels, and will try to put the points you mentioned in my mind when writing new novels. Have a nice day.