it's trash! it's a copy-paste of canon with only a few paragraphs about Anos and he also butchered Anos' character
Ridoux_Studio
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MÖGENI mean he’s not wrong, eveything is over descriptive with Anos getting barely any screen time, never mind character interactions honestly don’t see the appeal especially, the fact that he still conveniently “hasn’t realised” that its not his Homeworld. Dude is right just a copy/paste of canon with a few scenes of Anos here and there.
Ridoux_Studio:You've only completed the first chapter; I suggest reading a few more chapters before offering critiques.