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it is too early to give an in-depth review. the beginning is not bad and the story and its development is very interesting, although I would prefer longer chapters, perhaps reaching around 1000 words per chapter the mc' mentality is too hastily explained and I would try to re-explain the way it developed in this way, but I like his personality right now. it's just how he got there that needs to be better explained. Good luck author

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I got you bro I'll make a chapter about his backstory in depth.