Review Detail of asssssshhole in Essence of it All (DxD Essence Meta CYOA)

just advice lad, try to retwork your fanfic. make your fanfic more reasonable with common sense. with this current plot, i doubt author will finish this fanfic spectacularry. well, except youre try to make 'wish-fullfull fanfic'/'lack of logic fanfic' as for reference, try to read fanfic "deal with devil" on fanfiction net.