Review Detail of GRANDMAESTA_30 in Essence of it All (DxD Essence Meta CYOA)

Piece of advice to a new author like you, you must take into account the powers given to the mc. The king essence exemplifies what a true king is and under no circumstance will having an essence like The king, that influences the mc will ever be a peerage member of someone. If The king was not part of the package it will have being possible. Apart from that, for a new writer, it is very good. Thank you.