Review Detail of Dhylec in Chosen of the Void

For me, my novel will always be a 5 (If we don't believe in ourselves, who will?) But I know it's far from perfect. In fact, since English is not my native language, I know it is bound to have grammar mistakes, and the vocabulary will not be the richest one. That doesn't mean I will be complacent and let bad chapters be uploaded just for the sake of uploading. I am always trying to improve myself and my novel. So if you are so kind as to dedicate it a few minutes of your day, please let me a review telling me what you like about it and what I can improve. Thank you for reading my work.