Review Detail of Dearest_Violet in Fated Story System (paused)

Hello, passerby here, Now I could talk about how the writing descriptions are a bit glazed over at times, or how the flow of the narrative keeps cutting in and out, but.... Honestly? This is pretty perfect for an isekai/reincarnation web novel. The descriptions are just long enough so we get what's going on without being bogged down by descriptions, the characters are just interesting enough that we are invested in what happens next and the premise itself doesn't waste anytime setting us up for what's about to happen. Amazing to be honest, the only nit-pick I even found was regarding Herbet and his rather colloquial speech given his position but that could be explained later as a plot point, so it isn't even bad. Not all people may be into this genre, but if you're like me, this one is so far up your alley it's probably in your garage.