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DonJarbjorn
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I need people to comment on how to improve the story, I'm still lacking in writing. Later on in the story, there will be mechs and an interesting twist on who the villain is.

Door-kun isekai

DonJarbjorn

Liked it!

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Ashborn1609
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is this a harem (more than 1 wife) I hate harem

DonJarbjorn
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not harem