In one word: fantastic. Greate and interesting story. Characters are well developed. good pacing, satisfactory detail, empicable grammar and editing, no gaping plot holes or jumps in logic. Pertinent characters have depth, and the worldbuilding is well done. The only problem with the fanfiction is the Synopsis tbh, It doesn't describe how amazing the story really is.
ElJonson
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