Review Detail of asdasdssf in Harry Potter and the Lightning Lord

Unfortunately story sucks quite a lot. Everyone but mc and his friends are total idiots and frankly comical villains. Inner monologue for enemies is so childish and ridiculous. Meanwhile everything on mc's side is portrayed as right and moral. Even James bully past was changed so that mc would be in the right. Final straw was when Dursley's were sentenced and somehow Harry just got them to himself and started torturing them like maniac. Honestly mc becoming torturer was enough for me to quit, but situation was stupid anyways, since mc got them on his own private cell instead of them going to azkaban or some other prison. Overall story is written as pure childish power/ego trip with comical villains and stupid characters so mc can shine even with bad writing. Problem with this is that mc is not actually very strong or smart, instead everyone else is nerfed. Basically world/author just makes everything happen in mc's favor. I mean you are not very strong and smart if you can stomp a bug.