Review Detail of Sigheti in EMBER (Reborn From Their Ashes)

This seems to me like a wonderful beginning to a dark but stunning coming-of-age story. Your writing is beautiful. It has a clear fluency and rhythm that speaks volumes. I have to confess that I’m jealous of your grammar. I started writing to practice my English, and up till now, I still make mistakes with grammar and awkward word choices. All scenes are nicely paced, and the dialogue is natural. Overall, a beautiful story in the making. Well done!