Review Detail of Asbes in Mushoku Tensei: Moving Forward

Item: Mushoku Tensei: Moving Forward
Rating: 1

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AsbesLv41yrAsbes

Imagine being chucked just for chara development i mean isn't there better way to do that? all the the effort that build shatter in front of development not that say your writing bad but that kind of development unnecessary you could just not make Lilia not Rudheus love interest I guess this fanfic not lastlong like other Mushoku Tensi fanfic Lol

Mushoku Tensei: Moving Forward

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AsbesLv4Asbes

not gonna say i'm being crybaby *okay i admit it but this story has potential, even though it's not the best protagonists you can get his honesty, hardworking, effort make me infuated by him i know rn he's not fit with story background but can you give him time?

1yr

AsbesLv4Asbes

it's like this cuck is for his rushed development or something

1yr