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FortuneWatcher
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This is my first time writing a review, I've read until chapter 22, and I can say the story and character development is really good, the story is in slow pace and there are POV from another characters like the original novel, but its still refreshing to read because the main character is more relatable for me than the original main character and the plots is more interesting and realistic because the main character is just an ordinary otaku. Keep up the good work dear authour[img=recommend][img=update]

Mushoku Tensei: Moving Forward

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Longyunson
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I'll leave one last comment for the author since the story will die anyway. Be a man and let the readers know and put NTR in the tags. The worst kind of human being is not the one who makes mistakes, but the one who insists on making mistakes. Clearly you don't care about the readers after this last chapter, you're going to keep the same scrotum plot and keep making pathetic and unfounded excuses to justify your psychological distortions. So for the first time in your life, be a minimally decent human being and let them know in advance. Because all this is not gratuitous hate, the drop in readings, the number of comments, everything already proves that. Even the 3 comments in your favor didn't even evaluate the story positively, because they must be here to see R18 with Paul and they don't care about the plot (which doesn't even exist). Finally, I hope that all your relationships are as you described and think. Answering because the author is more pathetic than he expected and has started to delete the truths.

Imjustbeinghappy
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The author must have done a lot of "homage" while writing Paul and Lillia, clearly he's into NTR and must still love seeing his wife with others. It must be Roxy next, come on Paul, now that we know who the real protagonist is, it's cool. Since the author is not a man to put in the tags or inform beforehand.

Rudeus_6784
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u r sick c*uck u mf