Review Detail of asdsdaasd in (BL) Colorless Assassin

I apologize for yet another review, but I will revise chapters 3 and 4. As I was pondering, it occurred to me that I had greatly hurried the romance and hadn't intended to have both characters fall in love so quickly. But don't worry, I'll be adding more darkness, intricacy, and length to them to make up for my careless errors. Although I don't do it well, I'll learn how to fight scenes as I rewrite them. Since I'm neglecting classes and studying to write this, your continued reading of my book will inspire me to keep going.