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Rin_Nurnia
Rin_NurniaLv41yrRin_Nurnia

Since it's only one chapter so I cannot say much but as I read your story, the characters seems likeable and the storyline looks interesting and it was a nice reading with minor grammar mistakes, as I've seen so far. Keep up the good work, author :)

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Maryam_Mayo

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Maryam_Mayo
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Oh, well I want you to mention the mistake through paragraph comment, as i haven't noticed any By the way thanks for the review 😊

Rin_Nurnia
Rin_NurniaLv4Rin_Nurnia

Not that much actually😅 it's just the use of capital letters like 'banana Choco'... but since it's no biggie so I just accepted it👍🏻

Maryam_Mayo:Oh, well I want you to mention the mistake through paragraph comment, as i haven't noticed any By the way thanks for the review 😊
Khadija_Mayo
Khadija_MayoLv1Khadija_Mayo

This is my novel, please take a look here too, I hope you will like it.😋 "What was my mistake???"

Rin_Nurnia:Not that much actually😅 it's just the use of capital letters like 'banana Choco'... but since it's no biggie so I just accepted it👍🏻