Since it's only one chapter so I cannot say much but as I read your story, the characters seems likeable and the storyline looks interesting and it was a nice reading with minor grammar mistakes, as I've seen so far. Keep up the good work, author :)
Maryam_Mayo
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MÖGENNot that much actually😅 it's just the use of capital letters like 'banana Choco'... but since it's no biggie so I just accepted it👍🏻
Maryam_Mayo:Oh, well I want you to mention the mistake through paragraph comment, as i haven't noticed any By the way thanks for the review 😊
Rin_Nurnia:Not that much actually😅 it's just the use of capital letters like 'banana Choco'... but since it's no biggie so I just accepted it👍🏻