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akmal
akmalLv131yrakmal

if the author takes his time correcting the writing, it could be good story. for now its just a mess of words. .................................

Reincarnated in danmachi as hestia

vazmin_Mixolog5

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vazmin_Mixolog5
vazmin_Mixolog5Autorvazmin_Mixolog5

I will fix the my writing and please bear with me I am a beginner writer so sorry.

Kirito_Kirigaia
Kirito_KirigaiaLv4Kirito_Kirigaia

here have this ticket go get grammarly it'll help

vazmin_Mixolog5:I will fix the my writing and please bear with me I am a beginner writer so sorry.
vazmin_Mixolog5
vazmin_Mixolog5Autorvazmin_Mixolog5

Thank you for the suggestion I will download Grammarly and also I was using my phone for this so yeah but now I'm using my computer so thank you very much for the suggestion.