Review Detail of The_Weird_Magician in A Road of Runes
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author review: the first world is extremely fast with barely any character interactions and a lot of info dumps but after getting to the second world it keeps on getting better in the character development section I do research about everything about every world for the original sources some mistakes here and there but that is because I am on phone
A Road of Runes
The_Weird_Magician
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oh thx for coming, the story starts out a bit boring but the witcher world get better and in my personal opinion, my writing is also getting better per chapter
Paulo_D_Manoel:got here from your comment on my novel. let's see how your story goes.
Paulo_D_Manoel:got here from your comment on my novel. let's see how your story goes.
I've read the first chapter so far. had to stop to do something. well, so far the premise of the story is similar to other universe-jumping fics that I've read. Dude, I'm not here to say how you are gonna write your story, you are the author, but I feel obligated to say that the overpowered wishes that the mc asked did put me off a bit. well, to get better you have to continue with your work and writing every day. a rip for you that I can give; when you decide to write another fic don't make the mc wishes so overpowered and stuff. I will continue to read and give my opinions based on my reactions as I read. now I'm busy though, you will see my comments.
The_Weird_Magician:how are your thoughts so far plz be completely honest
thx for the feed back and I know the wishes are a bug but if anyone was in his position and did not wish for op stuff then they are stupid no offense
Paulo_D_Manoel:I've read the first chapter so far. had to stop to do something. well, so far the premise of the story is similar to other universe-jumping fics that I've read. Dude, I'm not here to say how you are gonna write your story, you are the author, but I feel obligated to say that the overpowered wishes that the mc asked did put me off a bit. well, to get better you have to continue with your work and writing every day. a rip for you that I can give; when you decide to write another fic don't make the mc wishes so overpowered and stuff. I will continue to read and give my opinions based on my reactions as I read. now I'm busy though, you will see my comments.
The_Weird_Magician:thx for the feed back and I know the wishes are a bug but if anyone was in his position and did not wish for op stuff then they are stupid no offense
Paulo_D_Manoel:that's true for most people. I decided to spin the wheel in my fic because of this exact problem.
gacha is good. one of the best stories on this site is the gacha one. essence of gacha or something. Love obe that one.
The_Weird_Magician:good idea for my next fanfic or I could also make it a gacha