Review Detail of BrewingFantasies in SCARED TO LOVE

[Reviewed on: 07-09-2022] [Reading status: 3 chapters] [Reviewer: Aysel Inara] -*-*-*-*- REMARKS: - Chapter 1 a lot of repetition of 'i' pronoun. I understand it's 1st pov but you can reduce the usage by structuring sentences. - All 3 chapters have no hook. There's nothing which could compel me to read chapter 2 but eventually I did because I had to review. - Chapter 3 had three different pov in one single chapter, it's not wise to do so many at once. Better to keep 1 pov per chapter, 2 if really needed. - Talking about the synopsis, it requires a serious edit. Too much of unnecessary detail, also no hook. Cover is bland just like the title. Not interesting or catchy. Scared to love reeks of coward characters and too 'plain' to catch attention. - When you buy a paperback you read that mini-synopsis behind the book. There's always one line or paragraph which hooks you, compels you to buy the book. That same 'wow' element is missing. - Chapter 1 had nothing else to state than the boring life of the FL. Nobody wants to read that much routine stuff as an opening. Chapter 1 ended with no cliffhanger, there was nothing which could make me to flip page. Well, if it weren't for the review. - Chapter 2 was same but with ML perspective. However, some action did happen at the end. But that was also not enough as a hooking part. - Talking about the outlook, the paragraphs were too long. It soon became hectic to eyes seeing those big chunks. Don't exceed the paragraphs more than 6 lines. - Punctuation, spaces, capitalization was messed up at various places. Not saying just for the sake of review, they indeed need a fix. - The plot itself is a high-school romance [i think] the execution needs to be done efficiently to make this book turn out even better.