Good Idea, not the biggest fan of the execution. Because of the fact their is no build up to the state where he can just instantly kill all threats to him in this world, in addition his friend and therefore only ''weakness'' is not introduced other than a name and as the audience I do not care about him even a little. I think this is a fun first draft and cannot wait for you to get better as you go forward. Best of luck.
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