interesting but you really need to work on spelling and grammar as I enjoy the story but really struggle to read any of it as there names changing every chapter would recommend Grammarly if your willing to as it should help with the spelling otherwise the story is good I have read up to Ch. 15 before I could not continue just know its not the story that's putting this ranking down its the difficulty reading it I wish you luck with your writing but for now I can not continue until you make it a bit easier to read
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