Good. Great spelling, grammar and punctuation. The chapters are long, and the story is developing at a good pace. I haven't seen ATLA, but have read a few fanfics. It's easy enough to follow with minimal knowledge of the world background. The harem was revealed at the beginning as 3 girls. So it isn't too large. TL;DR Read it. It's good. Only negative is that there isn't more.
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