The grammar is near flawless and contains little to no error. Both the pacing and sentence flow are decent. The dialogue is excellent; it is easy to discern who the speaker. Each character carries their own presence and voice. The story development thus far is very good. It is captivating and leaves one looking for more chapters. The author has great potential and I look forward to the completion of the story.
Serious_Clownfish
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